mmmhhh... basic instruments... it's overally smooth... but get repettitive... very repettitive... you should extend this, it's a good start for a good trance ^^
this is really for a video game, or you just make random soundtracks?
+the loop is messed... i dunno why you guyz put it in loop if it's not made for that, it we want to listen to it again, we just reclick play, ng loop system is direct, and cut your music if it's not made as a loop actually ^^"
just random soundtracks, and its suppossed to be repetitive , like when you stumble upon a part of a song you really like and wish you could play it over and over again, anyways i agree there could be more to it and more mixing but for now im just lazily making music lol and make music i feel like listening to at the time, but im gonna keep what you said in mind, and perhaps ill make a newer better version soon :) thanks!
lol, just, lol, sexy voice,
messy and repetitive drums, but the retro-style melody, I really like it! :)
drums repetitive... you can make them a little more tonic, that's sure ^^ (without bein rock, just, the basics! :)
... ew ugly saw, it's short, covered by thecnically good piano, nah, really sound ugly, replace it by smethink more deep, less agressive and short X') since you base the song on this saw, it kinda ruin the track :/
well, the piano and the fx's are good out that ^^
I kinda can see what you mean, but i like a little more agressive melody, So that's basicly why i chose the saw. The piano is not that agressive normaly, but i put some effects on it so it sounded like that.
Thanks for the comment!
hhhaaa, crazy, loud, lazy and wrong choosed instruments... and reppetitive looped song, is a no-no :/
well cant win em all haha ill just have to do better next time :D
smooth.... ssmmoooottthhhhhhhh. yeah, we might see some blanc self depressive psychic scene here :) the left whistle in the middle of the song is "hhhrrgrghhhhhgrhrgh" :D the impression of choir covered by a waterfall can let come the denouement, but well, it's a well made loop >_>
Thanks! It'll be better in context (I assume) but I'm glad you enjoyed it on its own merit.
the two different guitar don't fit together... well, the first coming sound cool, with these reverb, might fit well in a trance song, but then, an unrealistic acoustic guitar is played, and there sound don't fit together... no comments on the discret drums...
Thanks, I'll take your suggestions into account when I'm on it next time :)
@ Eltro2kneo : yeah so what lol, it still pretty dirty, and that's what we expect from industrial, do-not-give a shit ^^
Not bad but ...
...you have make some poor song in the melody, and the rock is too fast...
when the full version! >.<
why don' t you make the full version, y like the preview! he 's original, but you can improve it!
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